Friday, March 15, 2013

A Great Ambassador for the Hilltop Middle School Diversity Conference


by Lisne, 6th grade student

I am an eleven year old girl who enjoys life. I belong to a wonderful family.  Besides being part of my family, I also belong to a larger community: my neighborhood, borough and city.  I am also a six grade student. As a student, I take pride in being part of the Tech International Charter School.  As a member of a family and a community, I have many responsibilities. One of the most important is the responsibility to work hard to become an integral part of the society. I am sure that with the help of my family and Tech International Charter School I will be able to achieve and conquer my goals in life. 

At the age of nine I started to notice that I had problems with the way I was reading. This problem was not new, but now I was paying more attention to it because it was tremendously affecting my grades. I skipped lines without purpose, but not because I wanted to. It just happened.  Some words got scrambled and mistakenly I would say a different word.  I was afraid my vision was affected and it could become worse if I did not go to the optometrist. My reading levels were below grade and that made me nervous. I understood passing the state test was not possible if I was struggling with reading.  It was difficult for me to even imagine that I could not pass to the next grade. It felt horrible to think that the next year I could end up going to the same class again.  If that happened, my classmates would be in a higher grade and I would feel so ashamed to be left back. All these thoughts invaded my mind. Sadness and despair started to own my emotions.

However, I wanted to overcome this difficulty and be able to read fluently.  There had to be some type of help for me.  I knew that I had to notify my mother about this. I explained to her my frustrations for the reading difficulties I had.  My mother immediately contacted SUNY Optometrist and made appointments.  She also met with my teachers.  This was the start of a new journey.

The various exams that were performed at SUNY revealed that my eyes had a condition.  I was unable to see in the way that other people do.  Therefore, I needed vision therapy.  My teachers were informed about this matter and we began planning for accommodations in the classroom. My teacher gave me a special ruler that would help me stay on the line as I read.  I told myself that I had to try harder and be persistent if I wanted to pass 3rd grade.  So, I read for longer periods every day.  I woke up early in the morning to read before going to school.  I stayed after class when my teachers were available for reading tutoring.  At times, I would stay up late reading.  I knew that if I practiced reading I was going to pass the test.  Most importantly, my reading levels would go up. Dedication was the key to my achievements.  Not only did I pass the state test, but  my reading levels went up.  My condition was not longer a hurdle.  I had overcome this difficulty by dedicating hours and hours of reading.

Dedication is the key to success.  One way of committing to my education is by getting involved in all aspects of my education and taking advantage of the opportunities that are given to me. This opportunity has been offered to me to participate in this wonderful conference.  I will have the opportunity to learn new information in this conference.  I understand that interrelationships allow for learning as well. If I am one of the selected candidates, I would learn about how different and alike students from other schools  are to the students in TI Charter School.   I want to communicate with students from other neighborhoods and share ideas.  I have a strong desire to attend this conference.

I want to go to this conference because if I attend this conference I would be able to learn in advance about different high schools.  I want to get a head start to prepare for the selection of the high school that I will attend. Knowledge is power. It is important to be prepared to make good choices. The selection of a good high school is fundamental for higher education.

I believe I am a great candidate to be an ambassador for Tech International Charter School.  First of all, I believe I have the important qualities that a good representative of Tech International Charter School should have. I am a very outgoing, well-mannered, determined and dedicated student. I am an effective communicator. I can participate in this conference and bring feedback to my peers.In addition, I understand the mission of Tech International Charter School. I can talk about the dedication of my school administrators. I am a witness of how the teachers in Tech International have a great dedication towards each individual student, since I benefit from FREE tutoring after school.  I am one of the many students who stays up to two hours after school with teachers to help me improve my grades. Tech International Charter School has offered me with a great curriculum for my academic endeavors.  At the same time, it has provided me with great extra-curricular activities that support my interest. Tech International Charter School has offered me with a great education.  I also want to be able to give back with gratitude from all that has been given to me.  I can do this by being an ambassador for my school. 

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